All Comments on 'Almost Human'

Usually it would be the other way around, with the robot being a female. It was nice to see it this way for a change: a pleasant, capable, discrete, male robot that women can utilize to clean their houses and give them pleasure without all the complications that come about when one's lover is fully human. Thanks.

Wow, a low maintainence male, you could make a fortune with him. Well written fun read. Five Stars, hoping for more.

Great story, original and well written! Loved the twist at the end, that was creative and a great surprise. Guess most here didn't read it all the way!

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Studies have shown one of the hottest turn-ons for women is a man washing dishes. It would be so cool to have a robot’s help 24/7, day or night, especially night. (Wink, wink, nudge, nudge ...) I totally want one, too. But until they’re available, I’ll just stick with my dog. At least I can trust him to be loyal. LOL

It’s usually better to choose either first or third person when writing, rather than trying to switch back and forth. You started out with Lena in first person point of view, later used third person describing Max’s experiences, then slipped into third person when referring to Lena again.

Also send me a thousand Viagra with several refills. And she cooks and cleans too. FIVE*****

The author described the penis as 4 inches in girth, which is circumference, not width, which is diameter. Maybe brush up on your math, as well as your grammar. Also, it's pretty sad when a guy has to favorite his own stories.

Cute story I normally don’t read Sci-fi but this was a very enjoyable lite read. Thank you. I bet you were smiling all the time you were writing this piece.

Cheers

SAGE