All Comments on 'All That Glitters - Notes'

I have been amazed by all of the chapters of this story, by their depth of character development and breath of their equipment descriptions. However, after reading, scanning and attempting to digest this “encyclopedia” I am truly incredulous of what you have accomplished in creating this universe. Truly Bravo!!! To you Big Daddy and your editors.

i am very much enjoying the story, interesting characters and plot well out of your comfort zone being many chapters but very well done. your story index, chapter 0 could use some help like a go to index. You have 36 pages in your information index but it takes a lot to find what you are looking for. it does not affect the story but it does affect the time it takes for check of clarification of a point bottom line great story