by MarshAlien
Thanks for making only wait one day for this installment. If there was no sex I'd still be waiting like this for the next part of the storey.
This might be the first time I've ever felt actual anger when I realized I'd reached the end. :) I find myself skipping past the sex just to find out what happens next. Looking forward to the next one.
story(as usual),But the only thing that puzzled me was the paper he had to do on the "most boring part of American history 1900-1920". I seem to remember that during that period there was an event called World War 1.As a non American I must ask why that doesn't class as an important event,perhaps it is not part of the syllabus,can anyone enlighten me?
WW1 is minor in American history. We did not enter the war as a nation until it was almost over with. Our isolationist policy of the era does promote the era to being "boring".
About the story: Intriguing, as great as your Show Moms and Gigolo story arcs.
by a Literotican Troll
i absolutely love this series, its by far the best ive read on site. you find yourself rooting for all the characters, and its not so over the top like most stories on here, its just got enough fantasy in it to make the rest believable. keep this thing goin. And I'd have to agree that that time period was relatively boring and i love history, compared to the next decade with the depression and WWII, its not nearly as exciting and is given maybe a days worth of attention in classes
This story is so good, the sex scenes are completely secondary. I enjoy them, but the main story is just that much better.
I just read all of the series and can't wait for the next episode.
I am kind of shocked right now, going over this story, because this is probably one of the best stories I have read about redemption that I actually think of, since it's in an erotica website. Truly, I am extremely impressed and kind of sad as well that the story ended. I know the story was long, but so worth it that I wished there was at least another chapter focused on Patrick and Cammie. Wow, great characters, and awesome story. You are a simply awesome storyteller. And, I got to learn a lot about baseball as well.
If you like the great development from the first part to the sixth part, please stop reading at Part 6. Sure, some stuff is completely dropped in the earlier parts such as Tiffany's affair with the Patrick to Jill's apparent crush on Patrick, but everything seems reasonable. Part 7 doesn't follow this wonderful pattern. All I could think was: WTF? Where's the plot development to let the reader to see this? It makes no damn sense. Please, please, please, please... unless you like sock-puppetry, please stop reading at this part.
Man, I just know you're somehow gonna fucking ruin this story. I am actually afraid to read the next chapter.
the atmosphere is getting dark.
So many things could go wrong in the next Part.
ProxyAccount has it right. If you are enjoying this story, STOP NOW! Whatever you make up in your head as the ending will likely be far better than the next chapter. It completely detaches from pretty much all plot development to date. Very disappointing.
This is one of the most enjoyable stories on this site and it doesn't disappoint at all. Sterling and Cameron together, forever.
There are a couple of comments here saying "Stop reading now, Part 7 jumps the shark".
Ignore those comments. No sharks are jumped (as long as you've been paying attention up to now).
4-stars. Story is improving.
Trick's becoming more relateable. Dave's still invisible.