All Comments on 'A Safe Space Ch. 02'

I just wanted to let you know that I read what was posted of part one yesterday and I started part 2 and got about 3 paragraph in and it started to reference things not posted in part one because part one ends in one page with Monika thinking about them going on gap year soon but nothing about party's or anything like that

Something missing between ch 1 & 2? Not sure if its intentional but after Monika plans to confront Alex about stealing theres no mention of their encounter or shopping trip until Alexis remembers it later. Still an enjoyable read but this gap where Alexis probably learns to accept herself more is unusual for one of your stories

Thought it was great but hoped she had sucked carlos' cock, loved it though

Something has happened and half of chapter one is missing. I have resubmitted chapter one and won't post chapter three until chapter one is fixed xxx Michele