All Comments on 'a Desiderare'

Classic electric blue. Perhaps even quintessential. All the elements are there--the cafe, the city, the leather, the lace. And of course the decedent Adam Cain himself. If anyone ever asks (as I once did) for a single story that best captured your style, this could be the choice.

This is as good as it gets, EB. I agree with Loqui... it's a classic.

The final turn ... "Many years later Lizzie returned to the café." That is an excellent device to finish off the sensuality of the story.

You…and your characters remain favorites…especially the decadent Ruby. Please give us more.

Good god!

Four pages of insecurity and introspection. Do you even know what erotica is?

A classic indeed. Outstanding.

So much desire, so much passion and so beautifully written.

Five stars all the way

Jules

Pure fucking erotica ;->

This is so sizzling hot, thank you! Beautifully written, lots of buildup, and no disappointment when they finally get to it. Excellent writing as always!

Your writing & characters are some of the best!

I look forward to reading more of your works. Thank you!

This was an outstanding work to stumble upon today. Very sensual, great build up, incredible story. Very very well done.

Such a lovely erotic energy suffusing the whole story