All Comments on 'A Death in the Family'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Uh, went from 'hot' to 'terribly not hot' in a flash with that ending. Aunt Ivy doesn't count as she's the mother's SIL lol

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

THAT was brilliant! The story itself with the growing attraction and respect for the two women was handled nicely, culminating in the exquisite exchange of passionate and erotic Sapphic delight. That could have easily drifted off into an uncertain future, but the ending was shockingly wonderful. Unbeknownst to "Auntie Kate" she had just had the most fabulous sex of her life with her niece. Oh sweet loveliness. There has to be at least one sequel, as it seemed like Kate's sister almost knew ahead of time that her daughter would seduce her sister. Talk about "thickening the plot" with the rich cream of possible story lines. I'm literally squirming in my chair. :-0 Thank you for a wonderful story that hopefully is yet to be fully told.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Hope there is more to come!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

HAF! Please add more.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I enjoyed the story as it unfolded to history repeating itself. Nice ending to a road trip.

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