by spyman
I thought it was extremly well written and exciting-purrrr-got me going!! Very Hot! Thanks!!
remindes me of what my boyfriend did for me for my birthday was the best present ever
It was too predictable, especially at the end after the title. To be perfectly honest, it was so unrealistic that it was a serious turn-off. I've read my fair share of rape stories and they all have one thing in common: the woman starts to genuinely enjoy it after the first few minutes. Now, unless she's a nymphomaniac or knows what's going on, there's no way she'll enjoy it. Orgasm? Sure, I'll give you the possibility she'll come, but she won't genuinely enjoy it; remember: an orgasm doesn't mean she enjoyed it.