by JUDO
I loved the story but it needs an end. When will thr rest of the story be finished?
I've followed your story since the beginning, but it has been SOOOOO long since a submission. I just can't wait...
It appears that Intimate Confessions was supposed to write the final chapter, but he never did. He's posted another story since his last chapter of this series, but no news on this one. If he (or she) is working on it, could he at least post a note to that effect on his biography page? And, JUDO, if he (or she) isn't going to finish it, will you please??? I hate being left hanging like this.
it's been over a year of waiting... kind of "kills-the-thrill"...
AND BRINGS US BACK TO REALITY... finish it 'coz you got a rep to protect... and writing new stories now seem a bit of a turn of as everytime we see your name, there is this flashback of .. now will this be complete or no,,,
I think this story is finished. The pretense has finally ended; brother and sister have broken that barrier that they have been pushing up against since chapter 1; what happens next can be left to everyone's individual imagination.<br><br>
I'm satisfied that the story has reached an appropriate ending. Well done, both of you.
I loved the story problem is I think their is alot more that could be added to this. Hate it when writes leave it like this just dropping it off when it was just starting to get good please keep it going. easyas123, Missouri
It seems that you people need to read and re-read each other's work, before you throw it together. There are many things that don't add up...timing and events and the fact that Gretta "hadn't handled a vibrator since college" when she had used one multiple times in the story. So, yeah. You should probably work on things like that. And supposedly her little "interlude" with Sandy had taken place after the date with Tommy, but in the fifth chapter, she just went home and the others went to that sex club shit...really??? Please, not trying to be mean, but do strive to better your stories so they properly coincide with each other.
Please will you finish your tale and tie up all the loose ends. We the ardent desperate reader need to know how the story pans out. Please put us out of our frustrations...... or is this your devious plan.........hahahahahah
Oh God please finish this. There are so many more things that need to be told and haven't been yet.