by TheEarl
It was a great story, but you asking for a vote for five twice made me really want to give it a one :P
I'm sure this was not the first sister/brother fuck, It goes on a lot more than anyone knows. I just hope that one never gets pregnent from this. They can learn a lot from each other, which will be great in later years. This has to stop sometime, so just be careful and enjoy.
I loved it I do enjoy longer stories that I can get better character development from, but this one was great on it's own. I hate to have to say this again, but a non related couple has as great a chance of having a child with some kind of problem as a brother and sister in a first generation of incest does.
Loved it! Didn't drag on too long but long enough for development :) Overall, very well written. Keep it coming.
Love how you let the readers mind develop the picture naturally!! If my sis looked that good i'd fuck her too!! More description on the penetration though, that is the only thing I see wrong.