by watchdwag
I love how you tell your tales.. True or not, they are always hot and I look forward to each posting.
This is just about the best series I have ever read on this website. Keep it coming please!!!
I have read this series from beginning to end and over again. Simply Superb!
This is the most exciting lesbian story on the site bar none! I have read and rerread the whole series over and over. I wish you would write another chapter or continue the characters. I really enjoy all your work. You are a great writer!
Ok, just got done reading your Seducing the Babysitter story and I have to say I love it. The way you portray the domination and the sex between the women is just absolutely wonderful. Hope you keep it going
I liked this beginning well enough, but depending where it goes to from here it should really be told from the wife or babysitter's perspective. Husband isn't there for part of the chapter, and even if he could be told the details it just seems weird having someone narrate when they aren't there. If it switches around a lot then write 3rd person over 1st person maybe. Just a suggestion, but it's your stories - so disregard by all means.
ever notice the bitcher's always post as anonymous ??? The story is great... small boobs big boobs... it doesn't matter 10 stars......a note to the bitching person... go back in the corner and play with yourself. It is a sure bet you aren't having any sexual excitement which makes you bitter and destructive..Here's my email... Lit wouldn't let me sign up for whatever reason... 1/11/20
dukeofearl@gmx.com I am a guy btw if it makes the bitcher happier...
Threesome with a man ruins lesbian theme. Hey, everyone has their own taste. No need for insults.
The story is beautiful with two or more women making love. For me the male involvement screws up the story so I generally skip over those parts. But I think I'm going to like Lisa because she's adamant that men are excluded from any contact while the women are making love. It's really a great story, just the guy messed it up.
My pussy throbbed until he joined in. The first 75% of the story is amazing