by LesLumens
I loved the sparks of humour in there, made an already romantic story much more interesting.
Good luck!
Witty and comic, a nice break from reality.
Good luck in the contest,
Maharat
What a rollicking good read! Loved the dog. Wonderfully whimsical little story.
Great story, Les. Had me smiling all the way through.
Absolutely hysterical! I couldn't stop laughing...it's a great feeling to bring some joy to a miserable holiday ;)
You and I SOOOOOOO have the same sense of humor!! And I thought I loved your LST3K's! :D This was great--loved it!
Would be five stars but for one word.
You knock on a door.
You nock an arrow.
Good work.