by TheEarl
Awesome! You got in all the wonderful references, including hiding behind curtains, that voyeurism that is so much a part of Hamlet. I especially like that little Oedipal reference, as it mixes in not only the complex, but seeing what you might not want to see when you hide behind curtains. Very clever--you really pulled it off. Bravo!
The style of this piece is almost frantic. I had to go and read some of your other pieces to see if they were all this pathological in nature just to assure myself that you were channeling Hamlet.
Bravo!
Earl, this is an exceptional piece! Congratulations are very much in order. It's as if your piece really was an omitted scene from the play. It would have blended seamlessly with the rest of the story if it was included, I am certain. Very good work.