by DG Hear
An honest and faithful individual, and still young.
Great story as always expected from you.
Be nice for a follow up to this story.
Many thanks for your writing.
A U.K. Fan.
I always read everything you write, and this is as always excellent. I would love to see a follow up. Please keep submitting.
You have a way of telling a story so well and even sexual content is done so tastefully and thruthfully and so believable. Please don't stop. I always look for your submissions.
Yes. You definitely need another chapter.
Keep up the good work.
and I love stories that pleasantly surprize me, but then almost all DG Hear stories do!
As usual, another great story! I really would like to read about what happened after the initial shock of mom and daughter meeting. I always look forward for your stories!
Very enjoyable. Would deffinately love to read a second chapter to this story. Keep it up!
Very enjoyable. Now I am going to have to check your other stories ...
Good luck in the contest,
Maharat
But I'm an equal opportunity guy and always felt whats good for the goose is good for the gander, but this made me laugh at the end. Only because of how both the mother and daughter described the other to this guy.
Won't hear me say this much, but I did give this a laugh
-Risq
DG,
I loved that twist at the end. I would seriously like to read another chapter. Make it serious or fun, either way it will be good.
to finish this.
I warned you: write a good story and everyone will want more. You know what my thoughts are on how it should continue!
This really was just a great story you could sit back and enjoy. Like hdk's story of today, "Don't Bother Me," it's not about dissecting the story but simply sit back and enjoy.
Good stuff.
Regards, Jack
Wow, DG! Possibly the most entertaining to a story on LITEROTICA that I have ever read. This superb tale cries out for a continuation and I am sure that you will not let us down! Assuming the son takes after his father, as did the daughter, the beautiful Ellen appears to be the only member of this family with normal sexual appetites. Looking forward to the next chapter(s). Pete.
As I read this, I kept being reminded of people whose ages seem to be out of sync with their personalities. Be they the ‘Peter Pans’ or the ‘Old Souls’, their lives often are used to craft an interesting story.
This story was so thoroughly enjoyable that it jumped to the top of my list of favorites written by you. The ending seemed as close to perfect as could be achieved. Both this tale, and the story “Ex-Rated Wedding” by be0wulf, have endings that work so well that they left me with lasting smiles. Thank you.
As always, a wonderfully entertaining read. Well done and good luck in the contest!
Great story, and a situation I can relate to entirely too well. I am a 47-year-old woman about to go through a divorce after 23 years of marriage, the last 3 "untouched" as they say, and to my sheer amazement, find myself with a 30-year-old lover who makes me feel 21 again. I am not naive enough to think this is anything but a "boytoy" fling, but I do have strong feelings for him and can hope. I will certainly enjoy the "ride" as long as it lasts after so long "out of the car." Had almost forgotten what "driving" feels like! If nothing else, he has given me confidence in myself as a sexual being again.
Anyway, you have pegged much of the age thing exactly right. Some of what this guilt-ridden woman said sounded like you were in the room with me and my lover. (Should I look for a camera?) Best of luck in the contest. I also have an entry, but with a very different theme. Normally I don't leave anonymous comments, but in this case, I think you'll understand why I cannot even use my Literotica ID. Oh, great ending, and I didn't see it coming. Thankfully I have no children to "catch" me. Ha! PLEASE write a sequel.
duh;how do u splain this to God if u were anyone in this story??rickprince1949
What a nice Goldlocks story ("...and the third one was just right>")
And I loved that twist at the end. Yes, the story must go on.
I don't usually read stories that are labeled heavy sex but I like the author so decided to give it a try. I admit I skimmed at first but when the relationship with Ellen progressed I started focusing. LOVED the ending! I actually laughed out loud and even clasped my hand over my mouth like O.o until I realized ok you're at your comp being a doofus.
Hehe GREAT story! Can anyone else say sequel?
Awesome story, can definetely relate from being in a relationship with a man twice my age in the past... But the ending made it! Very cool!
DG you rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was great and so entertaining. Nothing short of fantastic!
Oh, and I liked it too.
Thank you
PT
I loved this story, I am 5 1/2 yrs older than my hubby...He says older women make beautiful lovers...This story was the BOMB!!!!
Pretty good story, though I saw the ending coming.
Lots of potential for a sequel...
As a 60 + guy, I loved your story. It's pretty unrealistic inasmuch as she will be on Medicare by the time he hits 35, but that's the nice thing about Literotica. You don't have to be totally realistic. I thought your unrealistic story was great. Congratulations.
60 year old George
DG I really would love to find out the conclusion to this great story.
Pat
DG, I loved it, especially the twist. I do have to agree with most of your commentors that a chapter two should be on your agenda. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Nicely played out - wants a sequel to sort of tie loose ends up..go for it!
C'mon, DG, you had to name your hero Ted Baxter? I mean, I'm reading this story and all I can see is ... well, Ted Baxter from the Mary Tyler Moore show (LOL!!). Oh, and wasn't Ellen Bartlett the name of one of the doctor's wives in St. Elsewhere, or is my early-onset Alzheimers kicking in? Great stuff.
Interesting. I liked the twist at the end. Excellent story. Now I really have to read the sequel to see what happened to these couples.
DG, whatever you decide about a followup to this story, I'll read it if I know it's there.
Ok, I don't comment much, but damn, I LOVED the ending. Off to read the sequel...
Let's see ... her husband is gay and cheated on her with a guy. Ted lied about the readiness of her car and took advantage of her emotional confusion to get in her pants. She allowed herself to get into situations where she cheated on her cheating husband.
Well-written but wow!
The attitude of our young friend is highly amusing and the story is a roller coaster!
Ok. I didn't see that ending coming. I really liked this story because it brought back some old, very awesome memories. I too dated older women when I was younger. When I was 21, I dated a 43 year old, and later on, a 45 year old. My God those were some good times, and I could relate to your story. Than you.
Holy shit....didn't see that coming at all fucking awesome writing
The Politician dad, the super correct mom and she looks like Ellen - that is why he thought he knew her -
A simple little winner -
It is VERY SELDOM (if ever) that I read a story from DG HEAR that I don't like and I REALLY enjoyed this one as well.
Although not necessary, I would have like the story to go on and hear what Cindy and Ellen had to say to each other and I would also have liked to hear that Ted and Ellen became an item.
But that is just me and I'm not the author!
I must day you definitely nerd to write another chapter, so much to explode now Cindy knows and what about her lover.
I'd love to see a second chapter, but it'd really depend on where you went with it. As of now the story is great and it's easy, as a reader, to envision a good ending from here.
I expected something like that but still funny, though I always find it annoying when authors leave it to people to imagine their own ending, and don't warn them in the initial author's note that the story is incomplete.
If I liked just using my imagination I wouldn't have bothered reading stories.
Love that surprise ending. No sequel necessary. My imagination can take it from here.
Yes this story is a long way from finished.
As I'm writing this the thought in my mind is.
Is it written and posted lol. If not what's keeping you
..... out many 5's. This story deserves one. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Great read and I must say I loved the ending.
You should continue this story. The whole story from the gay husband to the older women with the younger lover and then the daughter who is also gay. So much more could spin out of this story that I think would make for very interesting reading.
Screw age difference
Happiness is not a age factor
She 84 he 54 so what
Aunt 17 years older husband lived happily till he died first
She now 96
Keep writing as this
Goth only goth girl
Started to see where this was headed, but surprised by the woman thing. Really good story that I'm getting to late, but I would have voted for a second chapter.
I want to know more about Ellen and Ted; how did Ellen go about getting way from her politician husband? Now that Ellen is more emancipated, how would you fit her daughter and her lover in a story with Ted AND Ellen? 5 stars.
BJ
There is a second chapter to age difference,
Thank you for reading my stories.
DG Hear
W O W ! What an ending. I'm, it seems, a little late in requesting the next chapter but I do look forward to reading it.
"A CLIFF HANGER", if there ever was one ! I guess I can catch up on my sleep some other time.
THANKS !