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by Iamcanadian28

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
no build up

it seems clear where all of this is leading up to unless you surprise us with some twist. For now, there's no real build-up. Do better for the rest. G.Belgium

imready2imready2almost 16 years ago
A great start

I truly believe you have a great start. The characters are set to go in a myriad of different directions. Opportunity awaits.Keep going....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
good story

and good characters, but the shift in tenses (past & present tenses) is quite annoying. However, I would like to see more of this story. Perhaps the couple could watch their young neighbors fuck? And don't shift tenses next time! :)

PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 16 years ago
Hot

Another hot story. Can't wait to read more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Well that was much better than part 1

Thanks!

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