Rose Ch. 37-41

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"We finish the trials, thank everyone for their help and call for reconciliation and moving past this," Ella picked up. "And we get away from them."

"The cleanup of the chemical weapons on our island is nearly complete," Craig said. "As soon as we can move back, I want the children there for safety."

"What about the investigation," I said.

Craig looked at me and smiled. "We've already talked about this with Robert and Renee," he said. "We all want the Santa Fe area settled with a Pack that is a strong ally to Gila and El Paso. We want you to stay in the renovated pack house, and start your own Pack there."

"Our own? But I'm not an Alpha," I muttered. My cat smacked me mentally for that.

"Actually, we've all noticed you and Gunny have that potential, especially since your mating," Renee said with a smile. "It's the perfect solution. You and Gunny keep an investigation going, we have strong friends in my old territory, and we split the Belden Pack in an orderly fashion."

I thought about it for a moment before looking at Ella, tears in my eyes. "But I'll miss you guys," I said.

"It's the best solution," she said. "Pack members don't function well away from their Alpha long term, and having part of the Pack in Panama and part in Santa Fe won't work. You two will be great Alphas given the chance, Rose. I love you too much to keep you from your true potential." I turned and hugged her as Craig embraced both of us in his long arms.

There was a tone, and someone said "Oh fuck." I looked up, Melody was staring at her phone. "Uh... it's William. Maitea Jennings is dead. Someone got into her room and slit her throat."

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Ravey19Ravey19about 2 years ago

OMG. This is getting to be almost like WifeWatchman stories with the Iron Crowbar and Angels fighting against the Swamp Rats. Now it looks like the pack have their own swamp rats to fight. Interesting they want Gunny and Rose to start another "pack", panthers only?? Intriguing story now with Maitea being killed

catman71catman71about 6 years ago
love your writing

love the story, how the characters are written, and when you have lines like these "He shook my hand as we walked. "How long have you been a werepanther, Lars?"

"I don't know, what time is it?"

you have hit on how people actually speak to one another,

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Best chapter ...

... for quite a bit tight and plausible

OddBall68OddBall68over 6 years ago

I've been killing time while waiting for the next chapter and found difficulties with the stories meshing. Partwolf probably already knows the problem(s), it may explain Enrique's disappearance and require more story twists to try and make it work.

Enrique's _____ which was believed by the feds in Beyond the Were War and 'discovered' false in Mystery Mate became a reason for a pack creation. This story is before Mystery Mate so shouldn't he have still been ____ as far as feds are concerned? How did he become officially _____ and immune now but not later in Mystery Mate? Something is going to have to happen here that places him back under those same conditions he was in Were War.

He was not included in the blanket coverage at that time despite the statement as fact that he had been covered and was untouchable in this story. It looks to me like he's still got his ass hanging in the breeze, fed wise, at the end of Mystery mate.

Man it is difficult trying not to say spoilers for past stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Soooo good! I should be sleeping, my eyes are burning not being able to stop reading.

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