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Click herecalves rush to Mother Cow
iron filings fly to Magnet
a Seeker embraces
&
in turn
is engulfed by
.....Truth
This is a very enjoyable one to read. I really like when a poem plays with not just the words used, but the space they take and the space around them as well. Well put together and flowing freely, this poem is a gem.
was inspired by a description about an incident in Saint Gajanan Maharaj's life when one of his devotees havin' seen him after a long time rushed forward " like a calf rushes towards it's Mother "
MOOOO !!
has been a " joy to read " for you !!!
I didn't intend the double entendre & i'm posting another poem by my friend Tapas Bandopadhyay
warm regards,
Ash9
This is really good, ash. (Maybe even 1201 would like it!)
The organic and inorganic pointed to the ultimate abstraction with a wonderful, sparse language.
You may or may not have intended the double entendre of "calves," either as representatives of legs or children running towards "Mother Cow," but what a wonderful play with a word!
Nicely done! This was a joy to read.