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gaileeeover 1 year agoThis traumatized me a bit. Great story tho. Really well thought out and written.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI’m really enjoying this so far. Your story idea is unique, your character development is well done, and they way you describe the sights, sounds, and smells, it gives your story vibrancy and depth. Plus, I love the way you build on her revulsion gradually giving way to her lust.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoWhat an imagination you have. 5 stars! Thanks for your time and efforts.
Anonymousover 6 years agoYou do it very very well, so well I'm thinking of checking out the rest of your work despite not really being into trans stuff
Anonymousover 6 years agoYou're writing improved from the first story. You focus more on the isolation and sense of failure. Are you going to delve more into feelings of humiliation?
If I had to offer a suggestion, I would suggest to not utilize right and left so much. Whether right or left doesn't really matter and it's a technical fact that just forces the reader to check their mental images to see if they conform to the text. It breaks the illusion of reality, at least for me.
Can't wait to read the third installment
