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Click hereEnlightenment's Trek
by Art
In a candles glow I awoke
a choice was handed to me at birth
Beseech thee wisdom
or comfort in none
my trek begun
I Climbed
trebled thoughts
I Swam
pools of tears
I Dredched
self limitations
Stormed
inner turmoil
Journeyed across
a cerebrum plane
Sailed the seas
of my memory
Marched thru the knowledge
of my own retainment
I knocked at the Sage's door
my heart's pounding
I found harmony
in the depths of my mind
I found tranquility
in exceptance
Found wisdom in the wind
of my own breath
Enlightenment was in sight
when I opened my eyes
My passion and desire yearned
hunger and thirst
Fulfillment urged me
to step into the future
Armed with a sword and shield
truth and honesty
To continue...
...Enlightenment's trek
I wanna go too..I loved this one Art..So where is the rest? Don't leave me in suspense. The imagery here is so right, tells and shows me everything..Thisrt, hunger, wanting it all.. Treking to have it..and yet somehow I think you aleready do..Great one~~!!!
but your spelling mistakes really detract and often confuse your meaning. I recommend a dictionary and check any word you're not 100% sure of.
Otherwise, you're really improving.